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[*] posted on 7-11-2008 at 07:43 AM
4 MINUTES FLAT...


and the first thing i've written in weeks...

enjoy.hate,laugh...i try.


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the sun keeps screaming at all of us.
all of us that vampire the night.
it pays our debts,it fills our bellies.
but,still we sleep not feeling right.

i have no bond with any of you,
outside of the darkened,once smoky haze.
it could lead us into the morning,
but i just can't base it on those days.

i can't wait,but i'll burn my candle bright
and longer than a wick allows.
my words might let a dime-sized ray
into all that freaks the here and now.

but without the stuff that legends lean,
without the base for green to grow,
i'll harvest moonbeams,and sow my stars,
and pray to heaven's i've yet to know.




Will learn to Tap Dance,eventually...Will have you broads Hula,definitely...Trust me,you'll see.
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Mood: All that scene philosophy never meant a goddamned thing to me

[*] posted on 7-12-2008 at 08:34 AM


I read this a couple of times yesterday and wasn't sure what it was about.....but then this morning when I read it,it was clear.I love the way Paul uses words,a great talent indeed.

" i'll harvest moonbeams,and sow my stars " my favorite line,fucking brilliant.

You should do a book




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[*] posted on 7-12-2008 at 11:18 AM


in every song paul writes there's one or two lines that always stick out to me
"and pray to heavens i've yet to know" is the line in this
love it




you come at the king....you best not miss
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