Lucabrasi
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New Illustration in the works
Im making a illustration for the slogan "Live Fast Die Young". Its just for something to add to my portfolio and my upcoming website. The images are
the concepts and the last one is where im at now. Any comments or ideas are welcome. Hope you like it.
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thats killer bro!
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| Quote: | Originally posted by Voodoobillyman
thats killer bro! |
The very existence of flamethrowers proves that sometime, somewhere, someone said to themselves, ?You know, I want to set those people over there on
fire, but I?m just not close enough to get the job done.? George Carlin
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Can't wait to see the finished product of that.
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Lucabrasi
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Thanks for the compliments guys. Here's an updated version. I've probably spent a good 6 hours on it thus far. I have to redo the left hand so its the
same size as the right. The bottom banners arent flowing well so im gonna have to fix that as well.
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Very slick, I wish I had talent. You should set the clock at 2 Minutes to Midnight.
Well, its this place where nobody works, and the pigs don\'t give you any shit. Everyone smokes weed and gets drunk all day. Its a place where
cunts like me and you can truly take it easy and relax. Know what I mean?
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man your fucking good!!!
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| Quote: | Originally posted by upyerbum
You should set the clock at 2 Minutes to Midnight. |
or 7:06 (aka 6:66) 
| Quote: | Originally posted by REV.PAULIE
HONUS-as much as i can't stand a great deal of what you really like (for my own reasons that i would never hold,nor impose,against you),YOU FUCKING
RULE!
YOU,HONUS,IS WHAT MAKES THE "EDGE" COOL.
YOUR FRIEND,
PAULIE |
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Lucabrasi
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almost done
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thats amazing though seeing the stages
thats alot of pen work in illustrator eh for all those little points?
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I would shorten up one of the clock hands so it looks more like an hour and minute hand
| Quote: | Originally posted by REV.PAULIE
HONUS-as much as i can't stand a great deal of what you really like (for my own reasons that i would never hold,nor impose,against you),YOU FUCKING
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YOU,HONUS,IS WHAT MAKES THE "EDGE" COOL.
YOUR FRIEND,
PAULIE |
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| Quote: | Originally posted by ENDERA.x
thats amazing though seeing the stages
thats alot of pen work in illustrator eh for all those little points? |
it is a ton of work to do it but the outcome is worth it IMO.
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Lucabrasi
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| Quote: | Originally posted by XHonusWagnerX
I would shorten up one of the clock hands so it looks more like an hour and minute hand |
good idea, It will get done.
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I really enjoy seeing the progression.
Well, its this place where nobody works, and the pigs don\'t give you any shit. Everyone smokes weed and gets drunk all day. Its a place where
cunts like me and you can truly take it easy and relax. Know what I mean?
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Lucabrasi
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i plan on doing more of these threads to give people the inside look on my process of creating something. As long as you people dont mind.
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| Quote: | Originally posted by Boycott Christian HC
| Quote: | Originally posted by Lucabrasi
i plan on doing more of these threads to give people the inside look on my process of creating something. As long as you people dont mind.
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No, we don't he he.
Great job again. Hmmm... I don't know why bands keep bothering me for artwork, when everybody really wants stuff like this - and I don't deliver it.
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There is a huge market for what you do. The collage style you do is very popular and probably always will be. You dont do shotty work and you cant
find a better designer for the price anywhere else.
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Lucabrasi
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I've reached the point where im going to take a break from this design. I need to look at it with fresh eyes in a couple days and see what needs to be
changed.
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Love it, it turned out excellent.
so how do you do that in illistrator? i've never used it. can anyone make a 'how to' for idiots?
(side note tho, you have the clock saying its 11pm, you have the hands mixed up) 
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that is a killer illustration.
you should do it on some shirts.
i'd buy one.
\"thank you very little\"
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| Quote: | Originally posted by thedog
that is a killer illustration.
you should do it on some shirts.
i'd buy one. |
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I love the whole thing.... my only suggestion (and its not much of a suggestion, its more of an observation) is that the center of the clock looks
kind of bare. I dont know what could go there, but it just looks like a big open white space. Maybe bigger #'s on the clock and done in roman
numerals?
| Quote: | Originally posted by REV.PAULIE
HONUS-as much as i can't stand a great deal of what you really like (for my own reasons that i would never hold,nor impose,against you),YOU FUCKING
RULE!
YOU,HONUS,IS WHAT MAKES THE "EDGE" COOL.
YOUR FRIEND,
PAULIE |
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BDx13
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that's a good call, honus.
the clock is too clean compared to the rest of the design.
i'd also recommend considering doing the lettering by hand.
that shit is tight, though!
If I fail math, there goes my chance at a good job and a happy life full of hard work.
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Lucabrasi,
what was the end result of this one.
the new one you posted is cool too,
but i liked this one more.
\"thank you very little\"
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Lucabrasi
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At this point its the same. I have some issues with line weight and shading I need to take care of. I've kinda put it off to the side for now. When I
get it completly finished I'll post it.
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