Lucabrasi
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tits inside
OK now that I have your attention..
I've been working on this piece on and off for a while and sat down and am about 95% done with it. I'm going to (hopefully) have it printed up and
framed to put in my zombie themed art show in Oct.
I'm at the point where I need to take a day off from it and come back to it with fresh eyes. In the mean time if I could borrow my fellow "Thorpsters"
eyes and get some opinions on it and ideas that would be awesome.
I do plan on getting prints done for sale but of course getting the money together is always easier said then done....
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CR83
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WOW!!!! That is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!
Improvements? Man, I don't know dude. Maybe accent the word "Bastards" a little more so it is more of a focal point?
I don't know dude, this is just really cool.
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Dave
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fucking awesome, only thing i noticed was the 'B' in bastads is a little hard to make out at first...
love the shit on the cornors
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clevohardcore
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Ya the word BASTARDS needs to be more visible, but otherwise that is pretty bad ass. Maybe add more white shadow to the word, but thats it.
Each aspect of the soul has it's own part to play, but the ideal is harmonious agreement with reason and control.
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Kid Ugly
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I want that on a billboard outside of my house.
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newbreedbrian
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awesome as usual man
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fire, but I?m just not close enough to get the job done.? George Carlin
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BDx13
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this is really tight.
i especially like the sense of depth it has.
my only comment would be to tighten up the tracking of the words relative to the banners.
drives me crazy when the curves of the copy don't match the curves of the image.
If I fail math, there goes my chance at a good job and a happy life full of hard work.
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JawnDiablo
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I really dig thaty, and would totally wear it.
whenever you get it printed, and plan on sellin them on shirts, please let me / us know
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xChino_Martinezx
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I felt deceived and betrayed when I didn't see tits, but that felt retreived when I saw your work... that's more than awesome, bro! fucking great! and
I agree with the others, the word bastard is a little hard to notice at first view, but as soon as you focus your eyes in it, it's totally readable
(can someone please tell me if that words exits?)
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| Quote: | Originally posted by BD
curves of the copy don't match the curves of the image. |
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Looks good to me.
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Lucabrasi
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thanks everyone.
I see the issue with the text and the banner. Definitely going to get fixed. I'll work on the Bastards also. I may also redo the banners but I'll work
with the word placement first before I make that decision.
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